I want to compose an ad with as close to 300 characters as I can, getting frustrated

[lisadrogo]

Anybody have an ad that I can use to recruit affiliates that is REALLY close to 300 characters. I can't come up with one. The best I can do is 857. I often have this problem by the way, that's why I don't write letters to friends or family very often because they turn out to be BOOKS! LOL

Thanks,
LISA:D

[Elmarc]

I tried to relocate this answer that I copied before the DBoard was hacked, and it seems to be gone.

Here's a new copy:

Mike I have copied to my computer a lot of one and two liner ads that where made by an affiliate and SFI approved But I Can't remember where I Got Them LOL But here they are! Sandra The first set of 41 ads has been designed and contributed by one of our affiliates, Leslie Quaranta, and approved by SFI. Leslie is a very creative writer who used to work for an advertising agency. Thanks Leslie, we're lucky to have you in our group.

In your ad or ad subject/title, just give them a little teaser to get them interested and want to know more. Here are some of the ad headings we use, they pull very well!
1-!! Six Figure Income Training FREE!!! All you need is the DESIRE to SkyRocket to $uccess

2!!!!Part Time and Full Time Opportunities!!! You Make The Hours. . .We Write The Checks!!!!!

3- Join Our Team NOW, and Tell Your Pay Check, "Ready, Set, GROW!!!!!"

4- No One Can Make You Rich Overnight!! SLOW & STEADY Always Wins The Race!!!

5- It All Starts Here!!! The Rest Is Up To YOU!!! Are You Ready To Win Back Your Life?????

6- I'm Home Right Now Because of Opportunities Like This!!! No Fees or Obligations!!!

7-I Can't Make You Rich, but YOU Can!!!!! No Obligations or Fees!! Just Do It!!!!

8-Helping Honest People Make An Honest Living!! Free Training!! No Fees!!

9- Free Website, Promotional Materials, And Training! No Fees! Start Today!

10- Come Join Us and Start Earning Honest Money! No Fees or Obligations! The Sky's The Limit!

11- DREAMS Come TRUE!!! It CAN Happen To YOU!!! Free Opportunity!!! No Fees!!

12-Don't Miss This Opportunity To Change Your Life and Live Your Dream!!!!!

13- Don't Let Self-Doubt Keep You From Success!! YOU CAN DO THIS AND SUCCEED!!! No Fees!

14- Aren't You Tired Of Working For Crotchety Old Men With No Scruples?????

15- Are You Dissatisfied With Mediocrity? GET SET FOR THE JET SET!!!!! Free Info!!!

16- Money Is Kind Of Like Milk. . . It's Good With Everything!!!!! Got Money??? Try This!!! It REALLY Works!!!!! (Prepare To Be Impressed)

17- You Have To Want It Bad Enough To Make It Happen!!!!! Wealth Is Within Your Reach!!

18- You Could Be Earning Extra Money Tomorrow!!!

19- WORK FROM HOME!! STRONG COMPANY!! FREE TRAINING!! NO FEES!!

20- WORK AT HOME!! HUGE $$$ POTENTIAL!! FREE TRAINING!! GREAT OPPORTUNITY!! NO FEES!!

21- WORK FROM HOME!! HUGE EARNING POTENTIAL!! FREE TRAINING!! GREAT OPPORTUNITY FOR MOMS

22- We Provide You With The System and Tools To Accomplish Your Every Dream!! No Fees!!!!!

23- Truth, Honor, Integrity, Hard Work, and Leadership!!! Our Motto and Promise to You!!

24- This is a Great Opportunity!! Why Do You Keep Scrolling by it? I Invite You to Join Us!

25- Up For A Challenge????? I Dare You To Succeed!!!!! Click Here For a New Beginning!!!!

26- It All Starts Here!!! The Rest Is Up To YOU!!! Are You Ready To Win Back Your Life?????

27- Top-Notch People Needed For Money Making Opportunity!! No Fees!! Just Advantages!!

28- AMAZING Money Making Opportunity!!!!! Don't Miss Out On This One!!!!!

29- Stay in Debt, or Step into Financial Freedom. . . YOUR CHOICE!!! No Fees!!

30- Success Is Not Something That Just "Happens" To You! YOU Have To Make It Happen!!!!!!!!!!

31- You Have The Potential To Generate Massive Income By Working At Home!!! No Fees!

32- The Difference Between a Fantasy and Reality Is YOU!!! What's Holding You Back? No Fees!

33- You Have To Want It Bad Enough To Make It Happen!!!!! Wealth Is Within Your Reach!!

34- Free Website, Promotional Materials, And Training! No Fees! Start Today!

35- Work At Home Part Time, and Within 2 Years You Can Kiss Your Boss Good-Bye!! No Fees!!

36- Help Your Husband Retire Early, So You Can See The World Together!!

37- What If Investing A Few Hours Each Day Could Put Your Children Through College?

38- Tired Of Taking Orders From Disrespectful Bosses That Don't Deserve Your Expertise????????

39- Tired Of Working Harder And Harder, Only To Make Your BOSS More Wealthy?

40- STOP Wishing on Stars, and Start Building Your Fortune!!!!! No Fees!!

41- YES You CAN Have It ALL!! Don't Ever Let ANYONE Tell You, "You Can't" !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



More ad teasers

Over 2 Million people can't be wrong!

Free Start up today click here!

Unbelievable 90 prospects FREE!

I've never seen a better Marketing System!

Free leads keep coming in everyday!

The fastest lead generating system today!

Free Services generate leads everyday!

Need Leads?

Put your income on autopilot today!

PLEASE READ ASAP! This is Unbelievable!

Read these Testimonials for yourself!

90 free prospects in one week see how!

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Use these individually or in combination to either be or be the inspiration for your short ad.

This is a time when being a tease is a good thing! ;)

Elmarc

[Missy]

I copied your post and pasted it on my training site for my downline (hope you don't mind :D ). Creating a good headline is the hardest part for most people and if you can't come up with a catchy headline the odds of your ad being seen are slim to none.

Thank you!

Missy

[Elmarc]

That's fine with me, my posts are meant to be shared.

I just added 2 more headlines from a newsletter to my copy of the list:

Are You Worried About Your Financial Future?

Boost Your Business Today!

Elmarc

thank you for these amazing headlines!!

I will try playing around with them and see what I get!
Thanks indeed, the writer of these is a true genius!

[mike5150]

Those are FANTASTIC Elmarc! :)

Mike

uuuuuuuuuummmmmmmm................

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[flashgordon]

Thanks a Bunch!

What a Great Bunch of People!
I am privileged to be associated with you guys and girls (and ladies and gentlemen)!

Thanks for the headlines, Elmarc!

Flash

I am very new, in fact tonight is my first time really looking around. I signed up 3 days ago. I am trying to do an ad right now and this really helps!!

THANKS!

Jen:D

Thanks. That information helped me also.


Becky

So if I did this:

DREAMS Come TRUE!!! It CAN Happen To YOU!!! Free Opportunity!!! No Fees!! as the title for the Add

Don't Let Self-Doubt Keep You From Success!! YOU CAN DO THIS AND SUCCEED!!! No Fees!
Secrets of the rich revealed on the Internet: www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE
http://www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE

That is okay?

Becky

[Elmarc]

Originally posted by alabamamjfan200
So if I did this:

DREAMS Come TRUE!!! It CAN Happen To YOU!!! Free Opportunity!!! No Fees!! as the title for the Add

Don't Let Self-Doubt Keep You From Success!! YOU CAN DO THIS AND SUCCEED!!! No Fees!
Secrets of the rich revealed on the Internet: www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE
http://www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE

That is okay?

Becky

Absolutely! (And you thought this would be hard to understand! ;) )

Elmarc

Well, it was because I have family putting me down because of my IQ and disabilities

Here are some Adds that I created out of the information

DREAMS Come TRUE!!! It CAN Happen To YOU!!! Free Opportunity!!! No Fees!!

Don't Let Self-Doubt Keep You From Success!! YOU CAN DO THIS AND SUCCEED!!! No Fees!
Secrets of the rich revealed on the Internet: www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE
http://www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE


Money Is Kind Of Like Milk. . . It's Good With Everything!!!

Don't Miss This Opportunity To Change Your Life and Live Your Dream!!!!!
Take back your life. FREE Email Newsletter shows you how!
www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE
http://www.ezinfocenter.com/xxxxxx/FREE

Becky

I created 16 Adds for the FREE Website with the small Add + the Additions. A couple of the normal Adds were over 300 so I could not use them.

One question...Can these teasers be used with my other Adds? I would like to generate sales at the same time while I am trying to refer people.

[Bridge]

alabamamjfan200,

I noticed that you mentioned that your family thinks less of you because of their perceptions of your IQ and disibilities. Just ignore them and keep working your business. This program is perfect for helping disabled folk develop a successful career.

As for your IQ, it doesn't appear faulty to me. You are very articulate on this forum.

If disabilities were to keep folks from doing their best, my wife and I would be miserable. Becky, my wife has CP, is in wheelchair and uses one hand. But that didn't stop her from getting a Ph.D.

SFI and the internet are a wonderful avenue to success for anyone that is disabled. You don't have to push to sell anything or get folks to meetings or badger your family or friends.

Using simple advertising on the net to get folks to your opportunity site is most of what you have to do. The opportunity speaks for itself.

You have a great week!

Bridge Lindsay :)

Well thank you. Maybe you should tell my mother that. She thinks that the only thing I can do is food service work.

[Going_the_max]

I know this is an old thread but the above ads were said to be approved to use by SFI. If that is the case can I use these ads on the free classified ads sites around the web?


TIA. Joe.:D

[Elmarc]

Yes, you can use these ads wherever you find a legitimate opportunity. (No spamming!)

Elmarc

[Elmarc]

alabamamjfan200's demonstration of how to make new ads from approved ads is excellent! Use this technique and you will have unique ads that just may bring in those big numbers of eager referrals.

Elmarc

[cdy]

Elmarc,
When I advertise the VAO products,can I say?
Stamina that last for hours! A few drops under your tongue
and 30 seconds to 5 minutes you will start feeling the energy!
Will this ad pass?
thanks
cdy

[Ariel]

Thanks, Elmarc.
This is what I'm looking for to follow up 117 leads.

[Elmarc]

Originally posted by cdy
Elmarc,
When I advertise the VAO products,can I say?
Stamina that last for hours! A few drops under your tongue
and 30 seconds to 5 minutes you will start feeling the energy!
Will this ad pass?
thanks
cdy

When quoting claims made on the official site, be careful to include any qualifiers. Think through any word omissions so you don't change the claims.

The site includes the line "... stamina that can last for hours!" (emphasis added). Be very careful you don't make any promises bigger than the manufacturer does.
By using care in quoting the official pages, you will be OK.

Elmarc

Elmarc,
I have strung together some pre approved ads.
This is what it looks like:

Success Is Not Something That "Just Happens".
YOU Have To Want It Bad Enough!

Make it happen TODAY!

We show you HOW!

Interested?

No Fee. Join Us, Embrace Financial Freedom!


Is it approvable?
:)

[Elmarc]

I don't see any problem as such, although I would suggest changing it by adding one word:

Make it happen beginning TODAY!

That change should reduce the number of people trying to read this as a get rich quick or an instant profit system.

Elmarc

[cdy]

Surprising how just changing one word can
make a world of difference!
cdy 2003 with SFI!

[chiang]

Thank you so much for referring me to this thread. It's so helpful.
Thank you.:J)

[Elmarc]

You're quite welcome!

Elmarc

[Borsburne]

that is such a great idea for how to use auto responders i would have never thought of that i think i am going to use that on my web page

[Elmarc]

It's time to bring this thread back to the top!

Elmarc

[Lmarie]

This is such a wonderful thread. I have been trying to figure out headlines that won't turn people away. There are so many ideas. I tried the pre-approved ads in the marketing section and some of them were to long. But these would work great. Plus the less said, the more they want to know. At least thats what my mother said when she couldn't get me to stop talking. lol
Thanks again so much,
Lmarie :b

[portsidepat]

i came across this expired thread and thought maybe some others may find it as useful as i do. :Koolaid: pat

[d14real202]

Hello SFI Team worker,am a new member and am looking for way to advertise my product to the public thats why i need a reply urgently :(
from d1 :~)

[michiganbrandy]

Hey! Thanks so very much!
These are great adds. It is just what I needed! There are so many places to put small adds. Great for signatures too!
You made my day!

[Elmarc]

Originally Posted by d14real202

Hello SFI Team worker,am a new member and am looking for way to advertise my product to the public thats why i need a reply urgently :(
from d1 :~)

Welcome to SFI and our DBoard!

You will get a better response to your request by starting a new thread and telling more about what you need to know.

Elmarc

[Tau'ri]

This is a GREAT thread!!! Glad I found it... :C) :Super: :Bouncers: :Super: :C)

[norma75]

This is sooooo helpful thank you Elmarc!

[doodlebug]

Thank you so much, Elmarc, for bringing this thread back. It has really opened the creative juices here. I've been having a brain freeze in coming up with something catchy.

And Becky, you are awesome. Great ideas. Good luck to you.

Congratulations to your wife, Bridge, she is to be commended.

It's people like these two that represent an inspiration for all of us.

Elmarc, you've been so helpful on many other threads as well. Certainly an asset to the SFI group. Thanks again.

faye

[Elmarc]

Actually, norma75 found it. Thanks norma75!

I'm always glad to help where I can, so thanks for the complimnet.

Elmarc